SOUND POEM
Crunching ginger biscuits
Is like hearing soldiers tread
Running through the army
Ducking all their heads
Chewing an marshmallow
Is nowhere near as loud
Its softer then a speaker
With the cricket crowd
Biting some ice cream
Is like a shiver down your spine
I’d rather be at the beach
or swinging on a vine
Reading is so boring
Not a sound to hear
It’s like they can't say anything
I would like to run in fear
I would like to run in fear
nice rhymes Nate.have you thought of adding more verses ? Did you think of putting interesting vocab?
ReplyDeletenice rhymes Nate.have you thought of adding more verses ? Did you think of putting interesting vocab?
ReplyDeleteLoving the rhymes you've used Nathaniel. Your use of adjectives and strong verbs really brings your poem to life. Remember to be careful when highlighting language/words as you want it to be as easy to read as possible.
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